Content - Ideas and CDs are sophisticated & original. = 3
Organization - All elements of quality writing are present: strong and clear intro, thesis and conclusion, logical BP & CD sequence. = 4
Voice - student understands the audience, avoids slang, "you" and takes the prompt seriously. = 4
Word Choice - Writer uses sophisticated and appropriate vocabulary. = 3
Flow - Sentences vary in length and structure, creating a easy to read essay. = 3
Conventions - Writing is generally free of errors that interfere with meaning. Also, properly cited! = 4
In my content I gave myself a 3 because i feel like my commentary good have varied a little bit more. As for organization I gave myself a 4 because I thought that I grouped all of my of paragraphs well and the cds supported one another. I gave myself a 4 on voice because I didn't use the word you or slang in my essay. I gave myself a 3 on word choice because I used some sophisticated vocabulary but I also repeated words a lot. I also gave myself a 3 on flow because my sentences made sense together and weren't choppy however there were quite a few of the same length sentences. As for conventions I gave myself a 4 because it was generally free of mistakes and I had a semicolon.
Organization - All elements of quality writing are present: strong and clear intro, thesis and conclusion, logical BP & CD sequence. = 4
Voice - student understands the audience, avoids slang, "you" and takes the prompt seriously. = 4
Word Choice - Writer uses sophisticated and appropriate vocabulary. = 3
Flow - Sentences vary in length and structure, creating a easy to read essay. = 3
Conventions - Writing is generally free of errors that interfere with meaning. Also, properly cited! = 4
In my content I gave myself a 3 because i feel like my commentary good have varied a little bit more. As for organization I gave myself a 4 because I thought that I grouped all of my of paragraphs well and the cds supported one another. I gave myself a 4 on voice because I didn't use the word you or slang in my essay. I gave myself a 3 on word choice because I used some sophisticated vocabulary but I also repeated words a lot. I also gave myself a 3 on flow because my sentences made sense together and weren't choppy however there were quite a few of the same length sentences. As for conventions I gave myself a 4 because it was generally free of mistakes and I had a semicolon.